Would you actually read this Avatar fanfic?

To be honest , I don't think i would read that kind of fan-fiction.If I were you I would tell her to watch the whole series. Because Zuko is way out of character and she needs more detail in her story. What did he do to help restore the Fire Nation? And ,how he was feeling when Mai was sick and how he felt after she died.She just can't put "Lord Zuko was distraught and locked himself away for a month. He returned but was a shadow of himself. The nations continued to function, but it was not like the first four years." I would like to know the emotions he was feeling. She needs to show, not tell. And having every doc on every person who lived in the word is very unrealistic. I could see if he has those for his own people. Not for others who live in different country's. Also she has to make sure her OC is not a Mary-sue. From the looks of things I'm afraid she might be one.